alina Ştefănescu

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On the Image and Visual Part of Text; or 11 Ways of Looking at a Field in a Poem

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Robert Pinsky described poetry as "a vocal imagining" which begins as an interiorized impulse but ultimately becomes social. I am interested in the relationship between the image and the impulse's particular vocalization.

Are there mountains around the field? If there are mountains, the voice on the field will have echoes attached to its feet.


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Appearances demarcate events – images are opportunities in which to speak poetry. To paraphrase John Berger, one image interpenetrates another. Recognizing an appearance requires one to remember other similar appearances. There is an expectation of meaning attached to the action of looking at images. It is this search for meaning using our own cultural choices/experiences that differentiates, or creates irresolution, in the meaning of the image. I am interested in the vocal imagining which begins as an impulse and builds itself in relation to image, whether real or imagined.

Two ways of looking at a field in a poem:

“My life belongs to the world. I will do what I can. "

- James Dickey, "The Strength of Fields "


"And the new plants, still awkward in their soil,
the lovely diminutives. "

- Theodor Roethke, "A Field of Light "


The fields are present in the titles; the poets are interested in different things, strength and light. But both Dickey and Roethke are using the field, and its images, as a way to defeat forgetting. Both poems have a Kierkeegardian element of wanting to preserve something ineffable and valuable. To forestall forgetting by carving it into the field.

"Forgetting is the shears with which you cut away what you cannot use, doing it under the supreme discretion of memory….When we say that we consign something to oblivion, we suggest simultaneously that it is to be forgotten and yet also remembered."

- Soren Kierkegaard


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"We are eager to be complicit in our own dazzlement: to pay money for a theme park ride, vote for a guy who's obviously lying to us, or stand there holding the basket as it's filled up with cosmetics,” Neal Stephenson wrote “The Interface Culture.” To be complicit in our dazzlement—this requires us to examine our relationship to the headshot, the image, the self as we hope to “be seen” in the world. Increasingly, the field of our personal data becomes a meadow to be mined for information.

If you open a jpeg as a text file, you'll find a random string of glyphs and encoded cosine functions that describe the location, luminance, and color of each pixel.

Most images are data. Rachel Ossip notes, "Today we exist as much in data and images as in flesh." How is this data-field self imagined vocally in a poem?


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"A photograph is a secret about a secret," said Diane Arbus, "The more it tells you the less you know." 

This mixture of lucidity and obscurity is how the poem and the photograph reach the reader.

Do we read images rather than merely see them? Image literacy, the ability to think about what one sees in an image, involves similar interpretative practices to poetry. Even when being read or explained by the artist, the poem and photo remain voiceless in how they communicate what they communicate to each of us.

Field is pause   field is plot   field is red chigger bump where

the larvae feed   corn wig curled in your ear. Field cares not

a fig for your resistance   though kindly   gently   lay your

head down   girl   lay it down.  

- Erin Belieu, "Field"

Erin Belieu allows the field to define itself, and the juxtaposition of meadow language with her expansive use of the field makes the field, itself, feel relevant. The field speaks. And yet, I could not stop seeing a particular image as I read, namely, Andrew Wyeth’s painting, Christina’s World (1948). This association may be related to the popularity and prevalence of this painting, or it might be the way the injunction to lay down her head made me think of the resistance to laying down in Wyeth’s subject?

This resistance mentioned by Belieu kept dragging Christina back into the frame as I read. Wyeth titled it after his model, Anna Christina Olson (1893 to 1968) who lived in Cushing, Maine on the farm pictured.

She had a degenerative muscular disorder that took away her ability to walk by the late 1920s. Eschewing a wheelchair, she crawled around the house and grounds. Wyeth, who had summered in Maine for many years, met the spinster Olson and her bachelor brother, Alvaro, in 1939. The three were introduced by Wyeth's future wife, Betsy James (b. c. 1922), another long-term summer resident. It's hard to say what fired the young artist's imagination more: the Olson siblings or their residence. Christina appears in several of the artist's paintings. [Source]

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Two separate lines from Paula Meehan's poem, "Death of a Field":

The memory of the field is lost with the loss of its herbs

The magpies sound like flying castanets

Loss in its ecological sense—the articulation of things which disappear if the particular meadow disappears.

In ecology, endemism is "the ecological state of a species being unique to a defined geographic location, such as an island, nation, country or other defined zone, or habitat type".  For example, Bermuda cedars were prominent in Bermuda before the 17th century. Settlers arrived. By the end of the century, the cedars were nearly extinct, wiped out by the shipbuilding industry and foreign parasites. The Bermuda cedar is endemic to Bermuda. 

Kudzu originated in Japan, though it has grown characteristic of the southern US landscape. Indigenous species that are found elsewhere are not considered endemic to a place —- they can survive in alternate locations. Kudzu is indigenous to Japan though not endemic.

Americans benefit from "sweepstakes colonization,” living in a geographical location that has been largely spared the ravage of climate change. We have done nothing to deserve winning this lottery. We have neither tended nor protected this site of good fortune "rendered even more advantageous, as opposed to the "losing" species, which immediately fails to reproduce..." etc.


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Joshua Marie Wilkinson said that we are drawn to what the photo or poem wants when we look at it. We are trying to learn how to want, and to desire – and how this occurs "is the poem’s secret to keep, and the photograph’s secret to flaunt.”

Here is the end of Rick Barot’s poem, "The Field”:

In the dark, alone, I went out to see the turn toward morning.
Then I saw them. What the imagination would do with two people
sleeping in a field is keep them where they are,
unknowable, untouched. The imagination also wants them
to stir, to wake them back into their stories.
The day will be hot. The smell of yesterday’s heat
is still in the air, like the sweat of a body. What would bring me
to a field in the night and have me sleep there?
Whose hand would I be holding, out of desire or fear?
My pants’ hems are heavy with dew. I know how far away
I am from everyone. Am I a child again, am I old?
Or am I only who I am now, astounded at the transport of the body
from one end of time to another.

- Rick Barot, "The Field"


What should the eye want of the mysterious couple's image? Barot tells us the imagination has a script to "wake them back into their stories." His brings his own story, his childhood fears, into this space with the couple. There are shadows between them, and those shadows are what the poet recognizes. These are the voices he brings to the page.

This poem exemplifies the first-person roving camera. I’m thinking of how Caryl Pagel urged writers to allow “the poem to be an exercise in haunting instead of starring, an act of investigation instead of performance”; and how, in such poems, the first person I doesn’t serve as as a signifier of self, but as a roving camera or seeing instrument. Desire lurks in the heart of this roving motion, and something here is the poem’s secret to keep.


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"All photographs are ambiguous," John Berger warns, "All photographs have been taken out of a continuity."

Dom Bury’s “The Opened Field” gives us a word in the title which frames how we read it: this field is opened, something happened to open it, and part of the poem’s journey will exist in relation to this word.

Three boys stand in a frozen field —
each child stripped and hosed, the next task
not to read the wind but learn the names

we have for snow, each name
we have given to the world. To then unlearn
ourselves, the self, this is — the hardest task.
To have nothing left. No thing but heat to give.

- Dom Bury, "The Opened Field"

"Ruins are a way of seeing," Robert Harbison wrote. It feels as if one is looking at the ruins of field rather than its destruction—at the ruins of the children in relation to the field. The frozen position of statues.

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Leslie Scalapino called the assembling and arranging of photographs "a kind of contemplation." Louise Gluck’s formidable You is deeply contemplative and meditative. She often uses flowers as icons to focus concentration, and addresses them as one would address a divinity or a beloved.

What are you saying? That you want
eternal life? Are your thoughts really
as compelling as all that? Certainly
you don’t look at us, don’t listen to us,

- Louise Gluck, "Field Flowers"

I’m also thinking of how Dolores Dorantes' untranslated dictionary images in COPY (Wave Books) resemble small scenes in a film without subtitles – one wants to read the gesture in order to recover them from the narrative. But there are iconic in the sense that they encourage meditation rather than analysis—- to think upon a thing rather than to think through it. Poetry allows us to treat images as meditative icons, and to complicate this through invocative address.


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In "Two Versions of the Imaginary," Maurice Blanchot describes the image as that which is present in its absence, or something which appears as a disappearance.

Remind me to show you where the horses finally got freed
for good—not for the freedom of it, or anything like
beauty, though their running was for sure a loveliness, I'm
thinking more how there's a kind of violence to re-entering
unexpectedly a space we never meant to leave but got
torn away from so long ago it's more than half forgotten

- Carl Phillips, "Pale Colors in a Tall Field"

I think of these of two versions of the imaginary in Carl Phillips’ poem, with its lush, long lines and careful enjambments, and the echolocutive effect of these enjambments which echo back and forth across the field and the mind recovering memory in moments, fragments, snatches. To re-stage the moment which touched us is tremendous.

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Here is the entirety of a poem which looks at a field, or makes use of the images evoked by a field.

"The Bright Field" by R. S. Thomas

I have seen the sun break through
to illuminate a small field
for a while, and gone my way
and forgotten it. But that was the
pearl of great price, the one field that had
treasure in it. I realise now
that I must give all that I have
to possess it. Life is not hurrying

on to a receding future, nor hankering after
an imagined past. It is the turning
aside like Moses to the miracle
of the lit bush, to a brightness
that seemed as transitory as your youth
once, but is the eternity that awaits you.

The relationship between normalizing and making something seem inevitable is the strategy of religious fundamentalists who refuse action on climate change. They believe the end of the world is God's will. To contest God's will is to be unfaithful, or disloyal. Life is not hurrying . . . It is the turning.

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“Poetry is always the cat concert under the window of the room in which the official version of reality is being written," poet Charles Simic wrote in "The Flute Player in the Pit.” In the same essay, Simic links the desire of the image to that of the poem: “The secret wish of poetry is to stop time….. Poems are other people’s snapshots in which we recognize ourselves.”

“Scientifically Speaking” by David Tomas Martinez

There have
been exciting

discoveries
in the field

of me.
Many

of which
I have

made
myself.

In this poem from Hustle (Sarabande Books, 2014), David Tomas Martinez uses words associated with science (discoveries, field of) and applies them to himself. There have been exciting discoveries in the field of me. I love this line for its simplicity, and for the surprise of the final clause— “of me”—which carves the self as a field worthy of attention.

Martinez makes use of a narrowed margin which foregrounds understatement, and results in a sort of mysterious humility—the speaker doesn’t inventory his findings or list his scientific observations. Instead, he overturns the concept of discovering as used in headlines about the latest scientific etc.

To quote Simic again: Poems are other people’s snapshots in which we recognize ourselves. Recognizing often has the thrill of discovery, and Martinez’ discover of “the field of me” has the shape of a permission to other poets to recognize ourselves in the relationship between the poetic field (i.e. it’s projections, it’s use of space, it’s lineation) and ourselves.